Updated Resume, please review

[ben23]

Hey guys,

I have been working on my resume for my Independent Research G/T class and have come to where I feel like it is relatively complete.

***If anyone has the time to look over it and give me some suggestions, I would GREATLY APPRECIATE any help. Please PM me and I can email it to you with all of pictures and aticles attached.

I want to make sure that the resume I am sending out properly markets my value to the companies I would like to represent.

Please let me know if you would be willing to help me,

Thanks everyone!

Ben

God Bless

[ben23]

I guess it would be easier to post it here for people to veiw and comment on. Please let me know what you think, all comments are welcome, negative/ positive..anything!

In the beginning it jumps straight to the point, but I would open with a letter to the company explaining my experiences with their product.

_____________________________________________________________________

Dear ________,

      I am Ben Dziwulski, an honor roll Junior at Glenelg High school in Maryland. Here is what I have to offer to your company:

Accomplishments/ Visibility:

Two 8.5 Foot, 350lb Sand Tiger sharks caught from beach

Jr. Bassmaster tournament- 2006- 4 times- 1st

Jr. Bassmaster tournament- 2006-2 times- 2nd

Jr. Bassmaster tournament- 2006- 2 times- 3rd

Rocky Gorge Classic- Jr. Bassmaster tournament- 2006- 1st

Centennial Night Crawler Tournament- 2006- 3rd

Junior State Qualifying Tournament- 2006- 1st

Junior World Bassmaster Championship Qualifier for 2007

All- Mid Atlantic 2nd Place

Non-Fishing Accomplishments:

Academic

- 4.3 weighted GPA, 3.9 un-weighted

- Member of the National Honors Society

- 1st place School Science Fair

- 1st place County Science Fair

Community Service-

-3 and 4 year old youth group leader for Grace Community Church

- Marched in President Bush's Inaugural Parade for JROTC

- Volunteer Basketball Coach for Glenelg Basketball Camp

- DNR Electrofishing volunteer

- Volunteer Seminars at Bass Pro Shops

Sports-

-10 Basketball Camp MVP awards (invitational camps)

-5 Basketball Camp Sportsmanship Awards (invitational camps)

-Varsity Football and Basketball for Glenelg High School

Assets/ Visibility:

For a young angler, I would consider myself extremely visible for my age:

Internet Sources- Not only am I a moderator for a youth fishing website www.jasskids.com (Junior Anglers Sportsman Society), I also am a frequent messenger on many high-profile fishing websites like www.tackletour.com  and www.bassresource.com.

Maryland DNR work- Along with fishing, I like to understand what makes bass work, and comprehend different aspects of water quality versus fish concentration. I am able to gain this information by working with the MD Department of Natural Resources fisheries biologists. In working with them, I get to go electro-fishing, which is where an electrical current causes fish in the area to float to the surface. We collect the fish for length and weight, and then return the revivified fish back into the water unharmed. This experience helps me understand the way that bass live, just like Ken Cook- a fisheries biologist for many years.

Mentorship-In school I am working with an FLW tournament pro Frank Ippoliti. Frank is helping me fully understand what it takes to become a professional. I am writing a paper about what it takes to go pro in fishing. In the paper, I will make an outline of the steps that youths need to follow in order to set themselves up for a career in competitive fishing. Ultimately, I am aiming to have this paper published in a bass fishing magazine and many online sources such as tackle tour, bass resource, www.rodsbyairrus.com, and J.A.S.S. Kids website.

Marketing- Along with this paper, I have been attending marketing seminars to learn about ways to market myself, and the companies that I represent.

Media Coverage- Before my JWC event, I had an entire article in the local paper that focused on my fishing success and goals. It was the Front-Page story and main picture for that issue; my sponsors were clearly visible in the picture.

Seminars- I was invited by Bass Pro Shops manager Allan Ellis to do seminars monthly on topics that I choose. This will prepare me for future seminars that focus on other, more advanced topics. The first weekend of every month I also help conduct a seminar for youth fishermen that focuses on the basics of fishing. Overall, I have 2-3 seminars a month.

Science Fair- During 2006, I did a school science fair project about fish and color recognition. This project won at the school and county level, sending me to the All- State fair, where I received honorable mention.

Future Plans:

College-

Wake Forest or NC State- NC State has a fishing team involved in the College Bass Circuit. This past year, they won the national event. After they won, their club organizer (also professor at the school), Jonathan Phillips, called me. He saw on BassResource.com that I was interested in fishing while in college. He told me that he would love to help me get into NC State. In college, I plan on majoring in business management and marketing. I also plan to minor in fisheries biology and continue with my DNR volunteer work.

Professional-

After college, if I have the right sponsorships lined up, and feel confident in my ability to compete, I will continue the pursuit of a professional fishing career. Based on my research and what Frank has told me, I know that it is a career filled with risks, but I know that I am willing to make the sacrifices.

With that said, I know that I can offer a great deal of exposure through the ideas mentioned above, and I make sure to promote the products I represent to the best of my ability at my age. I am open to help out in any way possible through fishing shows and other events. I would love to represent your product in all of my fishing activities, and think that I am a valuable candidate because I have large contacts in the youth fishing industry, where many other adults do not have access to.

Please take the time to look over this, and let me know what you think- I am very open to criticism because I want to improve.

I would love to talk to you, so give me a call at *** *** **** or email at b23ball23fisher@hotmail.com if you have any questions. As a reference, please call Frank Ippoliti (FLW Tour Angler) at *** *** ****.

.

Thank you for your time,

Ben Dziwulski

*** *** ****

www.secretweaponlures.com/prostaff_dziwulski.htm

b23ball23fisher@hotmail.com

Currently Representing:

Airrus Fishing Rods

Cache Custom Lures

Niffken.com Tournament plastics

Outdoor Contours Custom 3d Mapping

JASS Kids Moderator

Hi-Seas Fishing Line

Secret Weapon Lures

[Holden]

Looks awesome dude. Can't wait until I can make up a resume like yours. I'll see you on April 1st. Good Luck man  

[deerhuneter02]

Get a free email somewhere from like aol or yahoo that sounds a little more proffesional then b23ball23fisher@hotmail.com get one like BDziwulski@yahoo/aol.com

[mayassa]

Here is my chop

                       Put your name on top centered in bold with contact info

_____________________________________________________________________

Dear ________,

      Let me start off with thanking you again for taking your time to review my accomplishments and goals.  I am junior honor roll student attending Glenelg High school in Maryland, with the high standards I put upon education and every aspect of my life I foresee myself graduating with honors.

The following is list of accomplishments to date; my potential future exposure in this sport would put positive visibility for your company and products.

Junior World Bassmaster Championship Qualifier for 2007

Jr. Bassmaster tournament- 2006- 4 times- 1st

Jr. Bassmaster tournament- 2006-2 times- 2nd

Jr. Bassmaster tournament- 2006- 2 times- 3rd

Rocky Gorge Classic- Jr. Bassmaster tournament- 2006- 1st

Centennial Night Crawler Tournament- 2006- 3rd

Junior State Qualifying Tournament- 2006- 1st

All- Mid Atlantic 2nd Place  What year?

Multiple 8.5 Foot, 350lb Sand Tiger sharks

I am currently representing the following companies:

Airrus Fishing Rods

Cache Custom Lures

Niffken.com Tournament plastics

Outdoor Contours Custom 3d Mapping

JASS Kids Moderator

Hi-Seas Fishing Line

Secret Weapon Lures

Non-Fishing Accomplishments:

Academic

- 4.3 weighted GPA, 3.9 un-weighted

- Member of the National Honors Society

- 1st place School Science Fair

- 1st place County Science Fair

Community Service

-3 and 4 year old youth group leader for Grace Community Church

- Marched in President Bush's Inaugural Parade for JROTC

- Volunteer Basketball Coach for Glenelg Basketball Camp

- DNR Electrofishing volunteer

- Volunteer Seminars at Bass Pro Shops You Should ask for Money or something!

Sports

-10 Basketball Camp MVP awards (invitational camps)

-5 Basketball Camp Sportsmanship Awards (invitational camps)

-Varsity Football and Basketball for Glenelg High School

Assets/ Visibility

For a young angler, I consider myself extremely visible and a positive role model for my age, with access to many types of publicity.  Along with this paper, I have been attending marketing seminars to learn about ways to market myself, and the companies that I represent.

Internet Sources

Not only am I a moderator for a youth fishing website www.jasskids.com (Junior Anglers Sportsman Society), I also am a frequent messenger on many high-profile fishing websites like www.tackletour.com and www.bassresource.com.

Maryland DNR work

Along with fishing, I like to understand what makes bass work, and comprehend different aspects of water quality versus fish concentration. I am able to gain this information by working with the MD Department of Natural Resources fisheries biologists. In working with them, I get to go electro-fishing, which is where an electrical current causes fish in the area to float to the surface. We collect the fish for length and weight, and then return the revivified fish back into the water unharmed. This experience helps me understand the way that bass live, just like Ken Cook- a fisheries biologist for many years.

Mentorship

In school I am working with an FLW tournament pro Frank Ippoliti. Frank is helping me fully understand what it takes to become a professional. I am writing a paper about what it takes to go pro in fishing. In the paper, I will make an outline of the steps that youths need to follow in order to set themselves up for a career in competitive fishing. Ultimately, I am aiming to have this paper published in a bass fishing magazine and many online sources such as tackle tour, bass resource, www.rodsbyairrus.com, and J.A.S.S. Kids website.

Media Coverage

Before my JWC event, I had an entire article in the local paper that focused on my fishing success and goals. It was the Front-Page story and main picture for that issue; my sponsors were clearly visible in the picture.

Seminars

I was invited by Bass Pro Shops manager Allan Ellis to do seminars monthly on topics that I choose. This will prepare me for future seminars that focus on other, more advanced topics. The first weekend of every month I also help conduct a seminar for youth fishermen that focus on the basics of fishing. Overall, I have 2-3 seminars a month.

Science Fair

During 2006, I developed a school science fair project about fish and color recognition. This project won at the school and county level, sending me to the All- State fair, where I received honorable mention.

Future Goals

College

Wake Forest or NC State- NC State has a fishing team involved in the College Bass Circuit. This past year, they won the national event. After they won, their club organizer (also professor at the school), Jonathan Phillips, called me. He saw on BassResource.com that I was interested in fishing while in college. He told me that he would love to help me get into NC State. In college, I plan on majoring in business management and marketing. I also plan to minor in fisheries biology and continue with my DNR volunteer work.

Professional

After college, if I have the right sponsorships lined up, and feel confident in my ability to compete, I will continue the pursuit of a professional fishing career. Based on my research and what Frank has told me, I know that it is a career filled with risks, but I know that I am willing to make the sacrifices needed to accomplish my goals.

I know that I can offer a great deal of exposure through the ideas mentioned above, and I make sure to promote the products I represent to the best of my ability at my age. I am open to promote your company and its products in any way possible through fishing shows and other events. I would love to represent you in all of my fishing activities, and think that I am a valuable candidate because I have large contacts in the youth fishing industry, where many other adults do not have access to.

I would love to talk to you, so give me a call at the contact information at the top of this page, and I look forward to working with you in the near future.

Very Respectfully

Ben Dziwulski

[mayassa]

I sent it to your e-mail in word as an attachmnet