Super User Sam Posted September 18, 2007 Super User Posted September 18, 2007 Suggetion. More white space by using one sentence paragraphs. All on one page. Take to your English teacher for help with grammer. And since you have a child I would think you would put off your fishing avocation and take care of the kid. You did not mention your wife. Being 18 and saddle with a child is a tremendous responsibility that has to come before your fishing career. If I was a sponsor I would like to have my name on your vehicles, boats and ads but I would think hard about an 18 year old with a baby and suggest taking care of the kid before you go fishing. Good luck. Quote
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