Fishing Haiku Thread

[Cephkiller]

Anticipation, I wait

Familiar tap, tap

Set hook....Violence ensues

Let's keep this going.  Any poets wanna contribute?

[Guest hibachi]

Dawn upon the lake,

still broken by the buzz bait.

Life's troubles vanish.

[Guest the_muddy_man]

HEY CEPH THIS THREAD EXPLAINS YOUR QUESTION ABOUT WEEDS

[Guest avid]

The lake is my home

the bass crave their solitude

I call, and they come.

[.ghoti.]

On a half-sunken log

a frog sits

death lurks below

[RecMar8541]

Up on plane, running tough.

sand blaster hits the face

gnats

[Guest the_muddy_man]

UP ON A PLANE

WE CANNOT SEE IN FRONT OF US

THE TRIM TAB SITS BELOW

[Cephkiller]

See, I knew if I didn't respond to your first post you couldn't resist contributing  

[Long Mike]

IN THE GREAT SEARCH FOR BASS,

I WANT TO BE TOP OF THE CLASS.

BUT I'M STILL JUST A NEWBIE,

AND THE BASS WHIP MY AZZ.

[Guest the_muddy_man]

Ah Ceph but you wanted too ;D

[Guest avid]

IN THE GREAT SEARCH FOR BASS,

I WANT TO BE TOP OF THE CLASS.

BUT I'M STILL JUST A NEWBIE,

AND THE BASS WHIP MY AZZ.

I think Long Mike is definetly a candidate for #1 Mook in the making.

You funny.

[jasone]

What's at the end of the line?

I pull, it pulls back

Damnit, its a rock again.

[jasone]

or....

Running wide open at night.

Bump, bump, BOOM, BOOM, BOOM

GPS won't show barge wakes.

[edbassmaster]

On a half-sunken log

a frog sits

death lurks below

Hey, thats a good one!!

[BucketmouthAngler13]

Out on a log,

Siting on the brink

Cant catch anything big,

Just one dink

All I got on my line,

Is weeds and a kink

My line just broke,

Hope my Lucky Craft dont sink

Fishing is bad,

but the wife is mad, I think

The sun is setting,

With purple and pink

Over there is a blue heron,

And yonder is a mink

Hey look, its a babe!

She gives me a wink

Oh crap

I just dropped my beer in the drink

[justfishin]

Lol, so where did you guys find the Black Hash? ;D

[Long Mike]

Nice one Bucketmouth!

[Fishin Phil]

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[Cephkiller]

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At least you got the structure right     Also, I like the excellent use of alliteration.  Overall, I give it 8/10 bonzais.

[Guest the_muddy_man]

Hey Ceph what's he gonna do with 8 little trees anyway

[Guest avid]

pop pop pop pop pop

pop pop pop pop pop pop pop

pop pop pop pop smash

Very cool.  I think we have a winner!!!!

[Jerkbate]

Buzz, jerk, twitch, and crank;

Deep and shallow boat and bank;

brush, stumps, weeds, and creeks.

[K_Mac]

Mist on the water

The world is quiet and calm

Perfection soon gone