Super User Grizzn N Bassin Posted April 30, 2014 Super User Posted April 30, 2014 So I'm writing a paper on fishing for my literature class and i need a few poems mixed throughout my story. any body wanna help? iI want to capture the feeling of being out on the lake before sunrise and the transition into day break. that kind of mist that arises between dark and light and all the activity that is taking place in nature. Quote
Super User jbsoonerfan Posted April 30, 2014 Super User Posted April 30, 2014 Here I sit on my boat Hoping that it stays afloat Can't wait for the sun to rise Got my sunglasses so it doesn't hurt my eyes I hear the birds and critters awake I hope I brought sunscreen so I don't bake The sun has finally shown itself I certainly hope I don't hook myself The time has come to catch some fish At least I can pray and wish LOL!!!! This is the optimistic / pessimistic fisherman's poem. 1 Quote
Super User A-Jay Posted April 30, 2014 Super User Posted April 30, 2014 The PB Cast after cast from dusk til dawn We fish so very hard all season long. Dredging the bottom, out in the rain, Our backs ache, we ignore the pain. Bugs in our eyes, hooks in the hand, We spends more time on the water Than we do on the land. Our lawns need cutting; the dog needs a walk, We ignore all the chores to flip the next dock. Other can’t see it, our life long quest, We are forever searching for a personal best. A-Jay 2 Quote
Super User Grizzn N Bassin Posted April 30, 2014 Author Super User Posted April 30, 2014 Here I sit on my boat Hoping that it stays afloat Can't wait for the sun to rise Got my sunglasses so it doesn't hurt my eyes I hear the birds and critters awake I hope I brought sunscreen so I don't bake The sun has finally shown itself I certainly hope I don't hook myself The time has come to catch some fish At least I can pray and wish LOL!!!! This is the optimistic / pessimistic fisherman's poem. i love it !!!! haha I Hope i don't hook myself! Quote
Super User Grizzn N Bassin Posted April 30, 2014 Author Super User Posted April 30, 2014 The PB Cast after cast from dusk til dawn We fish so very hard all season long. Dredging the bottom, out in the rain, Our backs ache, we ignore the pain. Bugs in our eyes, hooks in the hand, We spends more time on the water Than we do on the land. Our lawns need cutting; the dog needs a walk, We ignore all the chores to flip the next dock. Other can’t see it, our life long quest, We are forever searching for a personal best. A-Jay oh yea a jay !!! ' Some good stuff right there! Quote
Super User Grizzn N Bassin Posted April 30, 2014 Author Super User Posted April 30, 2014 It’s 4 am and the coffee’s brewed Picking up my buddy like I always do There’s the morning summer dew As I load the truck you can feel the Water in the air We get to the lake and nobodies there It’s dark, warm, and noisy all the critters are up The water is calm even though all the fish are swimming around We get to our spot and float down I drink some coffee and pack a chew , the morning is just coming through The sun begins to break the trees We cast our lines into the shadows We don’t speak We’re enjoying view like we always do It never gets old the view It’s not about fishing or the catching It’s about the simple things we were taught The land time forgot It will always be our spot Quote
Super User Grizzn N Bassin Posted April 30, 2014 Author Super User Posted April 30, 2014 i need some help with the last few lines. the bottom 4 any ideas to add to this. i want to get that feeling of the enjoying the simple things we benefits from fishing Quote
Super User Raider Nation Fisher Posted April 30, 2014 Super User Posted April 30, 2014 The Gassy Fisherman Here I sit broken hearted. Came to fish but only farted. Finally I caught a few bass. Ripping a crankbait through the grass. An hour later I decided I would head on in. My stomach was gurgling and I didn't dare break wind again. Reached the launch and trailered my boat. Then i loaded my rods and my lure filled tote. While driving home I decided to take a chance. I thought it was a fart, but I crapped my pants. ©Raider Nation Fisher 2014 3 Quote
Super User Raider Nation Fisher Posted April 30, 2014 Super User Posted April 30, 2014 It’s 4 am and the coffee’s brewed Picking up my buddy like I always do There’s the morning summer dew As I load the truck you can feel the Water in the air We get to the lake and nobodies there It’s dark, warm, and noisy all the critters are up The water is calm even though all the fish are swimming around We get to our spot and float down I drink some coffee and pack a chew , the morning is just coming through The sun begins to break the trees We cast our lines into the shadows We don’t speak We’re enjoying view like we always do It never gets old the view It’s not about fishing or the catching It’s about the simple things we were taught The land time forgot It will always be our spot So much for rhyming. Huh? Quote
Super User Grizzn N Bassin Posted April 30, 2014 Author Super User Posted April 30, 2014 So much for rhyming. Huh? Honestly i don't have a clue what im talking about hahaha!!! 1 Quote
Super User Grizzn N Bassin Posted April 30, 2014 Author Super User Posted April 30, 2014 The Gassy Fisherman Here I sit broken hearted. Came to fish but only farted. Finally I caught a few bass. Ripping a crankbait through the grass. An hour later I decided I would head on in. My stomach was gurgling and I didn't dare break wind again. Reached the launch and trailered my boat. Then i loaded my rods and my lure filled tote. While driving home I decided to take a chance. I thought it was a fart, but I crapped my pants. ©Raider Nation Fisher 2014 LMFAO!!!!!!!!! i love it! i have to present some poems in front off 50 people tomorrow. i know you have it copyrighted but can i use it? i think they will die in laughter 1 Quote
Super User Raider Nation Fisher Posted April 30, 2014 Super User Posted April 30, 2014 LMFAO!!!!!!!!! i love it! i have to present some poems in front off 50 people tomorrow. i know you have it copyrighted but can i use it? i think they will die in laughter You are more than welcome to. Quote
Super User Grizzn N Bassin Posted April 30, 2014 Author Super User Posted April 30, 2014 You are more than welcome to. Okay good im going to!! haha 1 Quote
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