This is just my .02 and you know what they say about opinions, so here it goes.
I might be nit picking, but I don't like to see the word I used too many times like I do this and I do that. By the career you have it's apparent you're an intelligent (might have just mispelled that one person so take a little more time to use sentence beginnings other than "I".
Also, be more specific about what tournaments you're going to fish and detail the bodies of water where your finishes were.
I think what you have is a good start, just needs a few details.