Try this:
"Thank you for your tips on writing a resume.
I have begun the search for sponsers, so I will send you a resume for your consideration.
Thank you,
Easternpafisherman"
Everyone should have a second person read over an application/resume for errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Find someone that is an avid reader, perhaps a business person, and over 35 years of age.
You are absolutely correct with that comment! Not enough people actually have the self confidence to seek constructive critisizm. One thing I tell my wife to do is to type her posts/resumes on a word document and have the grammar and style checked along with the spelling, then I will read it to see what it says and how it could be said better. I would do that with my own stuff too, but I am very much in the middle of my career and have another ten years before I start looking for a new job. One thing people forget to ask themselves when looking for a job or new position is, "What benefits the sponsor/employer if they hire me instread of someone else?" Somone who actually believes in the product, or someone who is trying to accumulate sponsorships?
Radical, thanks for the post. I hope you find the anglers you need to promote your goods!
I see what you mean!
HA!!! You got me! Yup, no one else read that before I posted! Now that is funny.