Coty,
I am not sponsored in any way, but being in management and having reviewed many resumes I would like to add some advice.
1. Check your spelling and punctuation (we all make mistakes)
2. Use your tournament wins more effectively as bullet points instead of all of them lumped together in one line.
3. Don't mention your cousin, Pure fishing is competition to most companies. (this way you appeal to everyone)
4. Don't use "I" so much to start sentences.
5. State what you are able to do to sell tackle for your sponsor (seminars,sportshows,etc)
I think overall it is a good start, just needs some polishing.